Genius Hour Reflection: Post Three

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This week's poem went a little more smoothly than last week's. I set out with a clear goal and managed to capture it reasonably well. I chose the article titled "New Influx of GTA Homebuyers Eye City". My goal was to create an alternate title for the article that would paint a slightly starker, less-optimistic view of the trend.


 I'm still trying to find a way to make a statement without it coming across as too preachy/judgmental, but you need to find excellent source material for that. So far I've simply bought a newspaper every week and tried to make a poem from one article. This coming week I'm going to work a little harder to find good source material.

In the meantime, here's the finished product:


"The Influx of New Wave Torontonians Putting a Further Squeeze on Hamilton's Lower Half."

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